March 2, 2017
I am trying really hard for you. Part of the really hard part of this is really reading through each comic every day. I even bought myself copies of Frank Miller's Daredevil run to put at the end of all of this reading - but BEHIND the copies for this month. Some of these are tough, this one included. I am trying to imagine the comic as a real look at the extremism. Trying to take the words seriously instead of going direct to making fun of it. The dance that the War Dancer does to take himself from one world to another looks like a silly setup. And the fact that the woman in the comic feels it necessary to keep commenting on every thing that is said there makes me insane. It's where some internal dialogue could have really made some serious improvements on the comic.I will give some credit here. When War Dancer fights - whatever he fights - at the end of the comic. When the arm gets ripped off - and we see from behind - that was pretty cool.
But the comic so quickly means to jump from place to place, It starts, changes, fills with senseless dialogue - and I have no idea what much of this is. Combine that with the elements that are trying to create the story - but fail miserably. Most of the time, the action should be conveyed in slick little twists and pulls. We see something - then blend to the next panel - and I am able to pull them together much like the panels are blended in my mind to make some uniform whole. Here, the science fiction is so strange - and it wants to be the basis of the universe - again leaining on all that is established within the original Warriors of Plasm World. I want to like it - even maybe not hate it. But other than the Dark Dominion comic, I can't see past the awkward art and bad Star Wars dialogue.
But the comic so quickly means to jump from place to place, It starts, changes, fills with senseless dialogue - and I have no idea what much of this is. Combine that with the elements that are trying to create the story - but fail miserably. Most of the time, the action should be conveyed in slick little twists and pulls. We see something - then blend to the next panel - and I am able to pull them together much like the panels are blended in my mind to make some uniform whole. Here, the science fiction is so strange - and it wants to be the basis of the universe - again leaining on all that is established within the original Warriors of Plasm World. I want to like it - even maybe not hate it. But other than the Dark Dominion comic, I can't see past the awkward art and bad Star Wars dialogue.